Finish It #1 – Long Time No See

Another story for my Blog Event ‘Finish It!’. How great is this story? Very touching! I love the different turns the stories take… another one is coming up later today, so stay tuned 🙂

No Plain Janie


She carefully opened the door, not sure what to expect. It had been a while since she has visited. Nothing was the way she remembered and when her eyes finally got adjusted to the dark, what she saw made her shiver… her mom had gotten so much worse. She was sitting in the same wheelchair but the nurses aids had rearranged the room for their own convienence. It was not they way her mom would have wanted. Her chair no longer was placed in front of the big bay window overlooking the garden. The shades were pulled tight and the t.v. was off. In fact, the only sound was the gentle hum of her oxygen tank. Did vacation really only last two weeks? Is that all it took for such deterioration?

How much weight had her mom lost, it looked like ten pounds. Her skin looked so sullen. Perhaps it was…

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