Finish It! #36 – I’m One-Minded

Thank you so much, Devaraj from imagine522 for writing this. Loved how you continued the story 🙂

All she wanted to do for all her life was climbing. She loved nothing more. The thrill she got, the peace she found and the constant risk that brought her closer to her inner self and to eternity. She was a free-climber. Most of her friends shook their heads when she told them with sparkling eyes how much she loved to be out there, hanging on to rocks with only her finger tips hanging high above ground. Often they looked at her and warned her. One day you will go too far. As she was hanging on with only two fingers, far above ground today that thought went through her mind. Maybe today was the day. Maybe today she went just that little bit too far…

That moment she realizing the edge between thrill and fear. she never tasted the fear of death. she was an one-minded person and wont thought about a second chance. she’s greatest idle quote was her breath ” have a one idea, and go towards that”, because she knows how choices will disperse our mind from the victory. At that moment she’s 2nd choice was Eddie, the man who courted her,followed her, and proposed her , but she’ll denies him always for her career and its risk. although she doesn’t seem to care for him, she likes him, he was a good guy, wealthy man. she remembering what he said ” i will wait for you at town hall restaurant 9.pm for your final reply to my love proposal. now she is disturbing by the second chance. either she should give up and get down and meet Eddie . And try for another shot on some other day, or she should climb up with her two fingers on a narrow cliff. by the 1/4 of second she realize who she is? ” I’m one-minded “. she bestowed the thrill and eliminated the fear.she started smiling with excitement , after the war in her head. she jumped …………………………
it was 3m distance , only one grip for her leg and her two fingers made the impossible. she made it after the long run of imagination. she climbed to the top of the hill and started chuckles and said” Eddie practice to kneel , I’m coming………………………………………………”

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