Finish It! #15 – Frightened But Not Alone

What a great story for Finish It! Loved the twist at the end.

Memee's Musings

fear_and_confusionHer head was hurting. She tried to open her eyes, but her eyelids seemed so heavy. She could hear voices, like from afar. Her mouth was dry and she could not lift her arm. What had happened? Where was she? She couldn’t remember what she had been doing before she ended up here. She could hear alarm bells and whistles as they rang throughout her brain. She could feel the goosebumps emerge on her flesh as the hair on the back of her neck stood up. She felt sleepy and weak but she was determined to know what was happening to her. She did not know if she’d yelled at herself, but she did hear her words echoing through her mind, “Open, dammit, open!!”

And now that her eyelids had responded to her commands she did not feel any less frightened.  In fact, it was quite the opposite. Now it was no…

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  1. Nice twist. I like the idea helplessness and help against each other

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