Finish It! #5 – The Great Escape – Part Two

Here is part two of a story which was written for the last ‘Finish It!’ intro. See, you can even continue writing on a story ;-)…

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Finish It #5 Blogging Event by Author S B Mazing (The Great Escape can be found here)

He tried to be as still as possible, peaking through the leaves, wondering if they were still out there. He’d seen the guy head off down the trail across from where he knelt. The girl was still sitting by her knapsack, unwrapping another ration. He waited a few more minutes, then retreated back down the path, away from where the new arrivals had landed.

While he didn’t know who they were, he knew where they had come from. His job had been to watch for these people. Now it was a matter of what to do with them.

A mile down, following the twisting, turning trail, he considered what needed to be done, but memories of the last attempted retrieval left his team rather skittish. These kids who were dropped from the…

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